Monday, 15 April 2013

Swimming Sports



Swimming sports!!!


On Wednesday  i got in a bus to go to the lido. When we got there we had to wait awhile till it started.
I was in the width races. I had to sit on the ground.The year 3 and 4 girls and boys went first.
I felt the water on my back i did not see that milania and kate passed me...i did not know i went passed everyone else I thought i would come last. but I came 3rd.
I got a green stick I got 7 points for Kereru.I was happy I did.
After my race I sat down and watched the length race Amy came first most of the time.
In Amy's race I could see Aye.i was sad for Aye that  she did not come first.
but I got over it.i got happy Amy came 1'st.i did not know aye was that fast because she came 4'th but that doesn't  count!!!
It was very fun I did not know that we were going to school after for the rest of the day.
I had a long time in the pool it was fun when I won!!!I think olivia had fun too!!!
I had fun because I got to jump into the pool I got to drink cold water with ice cubes in it.
Well not cubes!!!
After the races we went to the esplanade  it took ages to get their but finallay we got their I had to get a drink it was cool until I got in the tunnels because I hurt my feet and I still had it 5 weeks later!!!
well not five.

I hardly played ; (But when we were in the bus it didn't hurt As bad.After we got their Stephen couldn't find the key!!!When he did everyone ran into the classroom...
Then went into the office and got 2 plasters.Then we had maths.and some other normal things.
then i got sad that i had to go home it was not cool man!!! i got so frustrated i did not want to go home& when i finally got home i got happy for my self and felt like a fish out of water.
at bedtime i thought it was swimming day tomorrow!!!
Do you know what I did? I told my mum It is swimming sports but she told me it was yesterday I said sorry it must have been that I loved it so much!!!
So I never made a story about swimming sports again!!!
Just kidding!!!
I feelt great I went to swimming sports I did not feel bad I did not like it...
I loved it!i got happy because i got to get back to school work. it was my fav thing in the world.
by Olivia

2 comments:

  1. Great writing! I love the way you have followed the criteria and used lots of interesting words. Keep up the great work!

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  2. Well done Olivia. You did a great story.
    Where is your picture?
    Bye bye

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