We are learning how to write a character description using similes
My dad is as tall as the Eiffel tower. Anyway his name is rob. He can be as loud as a lion. He likes to dress smartly. He is allergic to cats . His eyes are as brown as hazel. He does not smile much. He can swim like a shark. He has yellow teeth from years of eating. He is awesome at doing his job.
His favourite colour is black. If you go through his stuff you will find that he loves to fix technical things. He can be very angry when he is mad, he looks like a volcano erupting!!!
When he is happy he looks like a piglet in the gooey brown mud. If you do not know my dad you
will probably think he will harm you but really he will not because he is like a soft teddybear.
He can be VERY annoying.nHe is as protective as the king lion in a pride. One day he asked me to do a job for him i went and did it. guess what it was to do!
It was to make ice cream
His favourite colour is black. If you go through his stuff you will find that he loves to fix technical things. He can be very angry when he is mad, he looks like a volcano erupting!!!
When he is happy he looks like a piglet in the gooey brown mud. If you do not know my dad you
will probably think he will harm you but really he will not because he is like a soft teddybear.
He can be VERY annoying.nHe is as protective as the king lion in a pride. One day he asked me to do a job for him i went and did it. guess what it was to do!
It was to make ice cream
Well done, I know you have tried really hard on this. I like the way you have described his physical features and created a really clear picture for the reader.
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